some good sentences for paper writing

1 precision and recall experiment should be conducted to see whether this method can actually improve the quality of the final ranking list
2 about the similarity threshold, the threshold is relied on the user to set it. However, how such threshold should be set is not clearly illustrated.
3 The authors of this paper tried to address a new problem, of developing a new distance measure for subtrees, which has not been proposed / solved before

4 and avoided the drawbacks of total mapping

5 there is just one sentence mentioning a very important information, and no further illustration is presented later

6 the authors claimed that

7 However, such claim is not convincing, and more details and illustration are needed to convince the reader that the efficiency of the PPI is really OK, and this should also be demonstrated in the later experiment section

8 This paper identified two critical problems/drawbacks of previous works

9 decreasing the page rank of spam sites could be directly achieved by using previous work

10 We three reviewers agree with some weak points of the paper, such as unavailability of category tags for most of the pages, the to-be-improved presentation and in-comprehensive experiment.

the which is not significant.



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some points in writing the
1 Do NOT start a sentence with “AND”. I have said this many times, and hope this is the last time.also not add the First
2 A paper must be consistent, so does a review.Not enough pages should not count as a weak point to reject paper
3 author+"proposed to"
4 "presents" should be "represent"
5 be concise
6 explain that why
7 method->technique

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major problem:
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2 's and in the begining

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question: to merge them?